Creation Monthly

[mbnp1701]

My first attempt at papercut animation (albeit without paper).
Still a lot of glitches there, e.g. Jet Bacon's half-transparent face, some very rough animation, and the lip-sync doesn't work that well, either.
But anyway, here it is:

 

[5810Singer]

I can't find much wrong with the technical side of that animation, but the content was pretty poor.

All that for a bad, bad pun?

 

[mbnp1701]

I didn't realise that the pun was that bad (maybe because I'm not a native speaker), and the original intention was to point out the dishonesty of creationist claims of being scientific, which I tried (and apparently failed) to convey by letting them abuse the pun, as it were.
I really need to work on my style-over-substance issues...
Thanks for the comment!

 

[MRaverz]

Hahaha, I found it funny. It's the kind of humour which is so bad, it's good.

Only problem I had was with the walking, it just looked odd, but that's really just nit-picking.

 

[5810Singer]

I really didn't mean to be harsh, but the whole thing seems to be dependent on the bad pun.

I understood the general point you were making about the intellectual standards of YECs, but TBH I could see that the denouement was about to arrive as soon as the guy started walking down the corridor, and then when it arrived it was just a very weak pun.

Also most native English speakers pronounce "peer" like "pee-urr",......or in other words one of these:

Anyway,....on the positive side I thought the cartoon was very well made,....it's just the punchline that was lacking,......really lacking........

 

[mbnp1701]

Hahaha, I found it funny. It's the kind of humour which is so bad, it's good.

Only problem I had was with the walking, it just looked odd, but that's really just nit-picking.

Thank you!
I see what you mean, the background is moving a bit too fast and smoothly compared to his movement, and the audio adds to the irritation...

 

[mbnp1701]

I really didn't mean to be harsh, but the whole thing seems to be dependent on the bad pun.

I understood the general point you were making about the intellectual standards of YECs, but TBH I could see that the denouement was about to arrive as soon as the guy started walking down the corridor, and then when it arrived it was just a very weak pun.

Also most native English speakers pronounce "peer" like "pee-urr",......or in other words one of these:

Anyway,....on the positive side I thought the cartoon was very well made,....it's just the punchline that was lacking,......really lacking........

I know about the pronounciation, and I tried find an incospicious middle course between "peer" and "pear" when voicing it...
Don't worry about being too harsh, criticism (and i perceived yours as constructive) will only encourage me to do better the next time...