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Looking for critique on the first page of a story I would like to write, and in addition any ideas on how the plot could evolve. Any help would be greatly appreciated. The flames began to lick delicately at the soles of her feet. The sharp spires of pain slowly crept up her legs. Within moments...

Yet you seem perfectly happy to hold your logical tale in your mouth and insist that you're walking in a straight line. I had no idea that these qualifications were a requirement to know anything about the subject of religion and how convenient it is that this allows you to close off your ears...